改写雅思小作文题目的方法

改写雅思小作文题目的方法。许多同学会在雅思写作考试中忽略雅思小作文的影响，其实雅思写作小作文在雅思考试中还是有着很大的作用的，特别是雅思小作文当中的图表题，如果掌握了方法，得分还是很容易的，雅思写作小作文题干如果改写的好，那么分数肯定不会低，下面是小编整理的改写雅思小作文题目的方法，希望对你有用!

改写雅思小作文题目的方法一

雅思小作文图表题题型包括线图、饼图、柱状图和表格这四种题型，外加一种组合图，比如考试时同时出现一张线图，和一张柱状图。无论是写哪一种图形，我们在考试时，第一句话永远都是改写题干。这就是小作文的固定套路，也是一个得分点。但是笔者在实际教学时发现，有很多同学不知道如何去改，改哪些地方，那么今天我们就来仔细谈一下如何提高这一部分。要知道，题干改写是文章的开头第一句话，一个良好的开头是高分的一半。我们拿真题来举个例子：

剑3真题：The graph blew shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

以上这句话是考试时所给的题干，很多没有经过培训的同学看到这种题干就会照抄，这样做当然会扣分。因此，我们在备考时，大家需要总结这样的题干应该如何去改写，如总结题干中的show我们应该怎么处理，题干中的时间表达between March 1993 and March 1999应该如何去改写。

【高分版】The graph indicates the jobless rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.

大家会发现，高分同学的改法，基本将原来的题干主语，谓语，和宾语部分都做了改写，并同时保持语法正确，语意没有变化，句型精练不罗嗦。将原来的show改成了indicate并注意加了第三人称‘s’。尤其需注意的是，高分同学需要考虑失业率the unemployment rates如何去改写更好，让自己的语言尽可能地道。但是，很多同学为了追求华丽用词，反而会越改越错，如果实在吃不准自己的用词，建议不要作太大改动，将能改动的时间和show尽可能改掉，其余的还是保留，尤其是只需要考5.5分就够了的同学。毕竟让考官看懂你在写什么，才是最重要的。

【保本版】需要考5.5分，基础很差的同学可以参考。

The (line可加也可以不加) graph indicates(这个词大家背一下谁都能会，因此还是改了) the unemployment(这个词不会改，那就放着不要动) rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.(最后时间from…to改写难度不大，因此改掉)

虽然改动得不多，不能加太多分，但是毕竟没有错误，这样可以保住开头第一句不错，至少语法分是不会被扣了。考试时，大家可根据自己的水平，衡量采取哪个版本，但是在平时，我们还是应该多积累高分版本的改法。

【低分版】反面教材，请大家引以为戒，不要犯类似错误。

The graph below show the unemployment rate in the US and Japan during 7 years from March 1993 to March 1999.

不知道细心的同学有没有发现，这个开头存在很多小错误，下面我们来简单分析一下。

常见错误一：below。这个below其实是不用写的，大家想一下，考官出题的时候题干下面放了一张图。但考生在写作文的时候，文章下面有图吗?因此这个below建议去掉。

常见错误二：show。很多语法不好的同学一定要注意，这个词粗看好像没有什么问题，很多同学看到这个词，以为它是错在照抄了题干。其实不然，细心的同学会发现这句话主语是The graph第三人称单数，而谓语动词写的却是show, 犯了最基本的语法错误，应该改为shows。

常见错误三：句子中将年份数错，误以为93年也算一年，因此算成了7年，这个大家一定要小心，其实跨度是6年。另外，时间状语完全可以写得简单一点，不需要添加during … years。可以将这个“在…年间”(during…years)放在第二句话的开头，用来引出第一段第二句话的总趋势(Overview)。例如：

The graph indicates the jobless rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. Over the span of six years(在总的六年间), the US rate experienced a downward trend while Japan saw an opposite trend.

以下笔者再提供一些常见的开头形式：

1. 如果表格的数据较多，我们就可以这样改写：

The table gives information about…

The table provides the details regarding the underground rail way systems in six cities. (注意：这里六个城市没有必要一个一个写出来)

2. 直接描述比例或数量

The chart shows the percentage of British households with a range of consumer durables from 1972 to 1983.

3. 遇到地图题或流程图我们可以这样改：

The diagram illustrates how the village changed from 1970 to 2000

朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生们在备考时要多总结题干的改写方法，总结相关的用词，在考试时，在尽可能保证不错的基础上，再去追求高分，相信一定能在开头给考官留下一个好印象。

改写雅思小作文题目的方法二

(1) 改写题目作为开头段(以OG Test 1为例)

题目：

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

改变从现在开始：

1. the chart——the bar chart

2. gives——illustrates

3. information——statistical information

4. on关于——regarding

5. percentage——diverse proportion

6. British——UK

7. people giving money to charity——people who gave money to charity——donating money to charity

8. age range——different age groups

9. for the years 1990 and 2010——in two respective years: 1990 and 2010

见证奇迹的时刻：

The bar chart illustrates statistical information regarding the diverse proportion of people in UK donating money to charity by different age groups in two respective years: 1990 and 2010.

让世界看到你的改变：亲自动手DIY你自己的开头段

练习1：

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. (OG Test 4)

练习2:

The pie chart below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

练习3:

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.

(2) 让主体段摆脱单调从改变主语开始：(剑4满分考官范文给我们的启示)：

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

在文章里面画出所有句子的主语我们不难发现，主语可以是数字，代词，题中名词，比重(或趋势)词。那么我们也可以分别用到各类主语来变化我们的句式哦!

改写雅思小作文题目的方法三

第一步：找关键词

一般来说关键词包括“名动形副”(名字动词形容词副词)。按照此规律，本题目

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

其关键词有： table ; give; information; consumer spending; different items; different countries;

第二步：四变

改写开头段，可总结出四大改变。

一变词性：改变词性，如将形容词变成名词，名词变成动词。

原题：The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

改写：the table below shows information on how much consumers spend on different items in five different countries in 2002.

原题中“spending”是名词， 改写成“spend”，变成了动词， 从而成功改写了整个句子。

二变位置：将原题中的一些关键词位置进行调整，从而改变句式，改写句子。

Given is a table showing the information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

将动词“give”提前，从而将开头段变成了一个倒装句。

三变关键词: 关键词同义替换

The graph below illustrates data on consumer expenditure on various categories in five different nations in 2002.

将table变成graph， 将show变成illustrate，将different items 换成various categories，同义词替换，从而成功地进行了改写。

常见的关键词同义替换有：

Table：chart/graph/line graph/bar graph/pie graph/statistics/data/diagram/illustration/flowchart/map

Give:demonstrate/describe/present/show/compare/illustrate

information about=the proportion/percentage of… the number/amount of/ changes/ variations/ how 引导的名词性从句

四变内容: 将原题中的概括内容换成具体内容，或者将原题中的具体内容变成概括内容

如将different items这种概括性的内容变成具体内容“ three categories((Food/Drink/ Tobacco,Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education)。将five different countries 换成Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey。

The graph below illustrates information on on consumer expenditure on three categories(Food/Drink/ Tobacco,Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education) in five different countries (Ireland, Turkey, Italy, Spain and Sweden) in 2002.

改写雅思小作文题目的方法四

TEST3的题目：

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

再来看给出的6.5分范文

This chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houses in 1989.

出路倒是有一条，那就是“句型变化+词汇改变”，措辞改变大家很好理解，句型变化是大家以前很少想到去做的，其实句型变化很简单，一般题目The table shows后面给出的通常是一个名词性的词组，我们把它改成句子即可，句型和词汇双变化，改写就容易充分了：

The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2002.

句型变化：名词性词组changes变为how…changed…

词汇变化：this chart变为the given diagram

average house prices变为the real estate market

in five different cities后面添加around the world

between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989变为from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2000

同时我们也可以作另外一种改写：

一般的题目是The graph shows…，改为The information given by the graph is about…则很轻易的改换了句型表达。

再看几个示例

示例 1

题目

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of family living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

改写一

The table illustrates what percentage of Australian families among various kinds lived in poverty in 1999.

改写二

The information given by the table is about the percentage of poor families in Australia coming from various backgrounds in 1990.

示例 2

题目

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

改写一

The bar chart demonstrates how many males and females in Australia in 1999 held various post-school diplomas.

改写二

The information provided by this bar chart is about the percentage of Australian males and females holding the various post-school diplomas.

示例 3

题目

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

改写

The line graph above demonstrates how much water used in three areas changed from 1990 to 2000 while the data coming from the below table is about consumption in two different countries – Brazil and Congo.

两个图表的题目比较好写了，可以一个写成从句，一个以The information given by the table is about…来改写。