
雅思g类写作技巧。雅思G类备考考生人数较少,所以备考的资料也不多,而在雅思G类小作文中,书信类是唯一的形式。很多G类考生对小作文重视度不够,对书信类的一些要求和语气都不太了解。下面是小编整理的雅思g类写作技巧,欢迎阅读!
雅思g类写作技巧一
一个中心:以完成任务为中心。题目中所有的细节必须涉及,所有的问题必须回答。
两个基本点:
第一、在考试中,无论遇到哪种类型的书信又或是题目中有任何的具体要求,都要谨记下列的三要素:
1. 明确的指出自己写信的目的
2. 清晰、准确的陈述事实
3. 使用坚定但礼貌的语言(这一点与概述中提及的内容一致)
在整章中,我会强调每一种类型书信的“目的”:
如果你写信是要投诉,就用一句话把问题概括,比如:我买的产品不好用;修理工作不彻底;食物太难吃;新租的房子家具太旧等等
如果你写信寻求帮助,那就清楚的告诉收信人你遇到了什么困难,你需要哪些具体方面的帮助等
如果你写求职信,那就说明白为什么你比别人强
总之,一封有着明确“目的”的信,就像是承载着期望的生命。
下面有三封短信,看看它们都带着什么样的目的(雅思考试中最常见类型)
NB (提示): 这些书信仅用于了解上述3要素的重要性,但表达地道、文字准确,值得学习;但是正式考试中,除了需要书信的内容,还要提供称谓和落款等内容。
书信一、写信目的:道歉信 (承认错误、表示歉意、请求原谅、寻求解决方案)
I’m so sorry I missed our appointment for this morning; I got held up in a faculty meeting and could not break away.
Please call me to reschedule. I am available any weekday except Friday from 2 to 4 P.M., and because I missed our meeting I also am willing to drop by the office any time Saturday if that works better for you.
My apologies.
书信二、写信目的:抱怨信(描述现象、陈述理由、提出解决)
I have just moved into Apartment 32B, and am enjoying my stay here. However, I do have a concern about one of my neighbors.
When I signed my lease it was emphasized to me that there could be no more than two persons living full-time in a studio apartment. That is definitely not the case in the apartment directly above mine, 33B.
During the one month I have been here, there must have been at least six adults and three young children somehow squeezed into that studio apartment at any one time. The constant noise, the traffic into and out of the apartment, and the four cars they use is very annoying.
Please look into the matter and advise me of the resolution as soon as possible.
书信三、写信目的: 请求图书馆增加互联网服务 (介绍身份、描述问题、博得理解)
I am a senior citizen and a regular patron of the Small-town Public Library.
I think we have a fine facility in Small-town, but compared to other libraries in the area we are behind the times. Our library has only two computers connected to the Internet, and the last time I attempted to use the machines, there were six people ahead of me.
Are there any plans to get more computers? I would be happy to participate in a fundraising effort to add more machines and connections to the Internet.
第二个基本点 写信的基调
雅思的书信写作要在一开始就定下整体基调。开头要明确的表达自己的感情,说明写信的原因。在信的中间部分要将所讲述的事情和收信人联系起来。
为使语言感觉真切,需要运用一些写作技巧。其中最简单的技巧就是关注“人称上的变化”,即:“我”和“你”。告诉收信人“我想和你一起工作”或者“我有一个问题希望你能帮我解决”,让两个人都成为信的主角,然后找一个方式把双方的利益通过“we”这样的人称代词联系起来。
注意不要过分使用第一人称。一封满眼都是“I”、“my”的信是不会让人感到亲切的。
附赠:基本结构如下:
第一段 简单介绍自己(要联系这封信的目的)+ 说明你和收信人之间的关系
第二段 具体说明一些问题(按题目要求,可适当的增加一些细节)
第三段 明确提出自己的想法(按题目要求,适当增加一些谦辞,但不可数量过多)
雅思g类写作技巧二
想要达到雅思G类写作的7分,必须要满足于一下的三个要点。
要点一、合理联想
由于G类的书信是往往看学生有没有能力在英语国家顺利地生活。所以只要书信的情节符合生活常识,那么考官是完全可以允许学生进行适当联想来让书信的情节更充实的。而且正是因为书信部分允许有一部分合理的想象,所以即使是我们遇到了一些想不出的生词,那么也往往可以适当的修改情节用一些其他比较简单的词汇来进行替换。
要点二、追求稳妥
对于雅思G类写作书信的用词我们应该追求稳妥,一方面是因为它不需要使用过大的词汇,另一方面是因为也一定不能过于口语化,甚至俚语化(slangy)。参加移民类考试的同学大部分都是有工作经验的,甚至还有不少人都有商业英语信函的经历,但是请你们注意:雅思的书信考试完全没有必要像那种商业公文一样那么正式,即使是一些比较正式的话题,只要你们能够保证不用太口语化的词汇就已经很好了。
要点三、合理安排时间
雅思G类写作写书信有切记“福尔摩斯”式的倾向。有些同学往往由于工作经验非常丰富,思维也很严密,但是在合理虚构情节的时候他们却会走向了另一个极端:主体段的正文部分由于过于追求逻辑的完美,甚至最后写出来的书信也确实精彩,但是却在最后导致了考试时间的不够用,这种情况同样是非常令人惋惜的。考试必须是在时间允许的前提下尽可能写好,而并不是追求完美,希望广大的G类考生注意。
雅思g类写作技巧三
一、感谢信
1. 书信结构
写感谢信时,书信主体部分一般分为三个段落。第一段自我介绍,表明自己的身份(如果给比较陌生的人写信),说明写信的目的并且表示清楚对对方的谢意。第二段详细说明对方帮助自己的过程,事情发生的具体细节,强调对方给予帮助的重要性。第三段提出回报对方好意的建议,并再次表达自己的感谢之情。
2. 常用句型
1) I take this opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.
2) I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.
3) My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I wish I could repay it one day.
4) Please accept my most cordial thanks for your timely help, which I will always remember.
5) Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind help.
6) I hope to have an opportunity to reciprocate your generosity.
7) I appreciate the support you have provided and your assistance has been invaluable to me.
二、道歉信
1. 书信结构
道歉信通常有四个主要部分。第一部分自我介绍,说明写信目的,为自己做错的事表示歉意。第二部分说明当时情况并解释原因,提出有力的观点,侧重事实,避免归咎其他人。第三部分提出补救方案,表达自己想改过或者补救的希望,注意考虑收信人的情绪。最后一部分再次道歉,首尾呼应,表达不会再犯同样错误的愿望,建立信用和信任。
2. 常用句型
1) I just wanted to write you a quick note to apologise for not being able to keep our appointment tomorrow.
2) In deference to your valuable time,I would like to get straight to the point and admit that I was wrong.
3) I really hope that you will be able to accept my apology.
4) Please accept my apologies for…
5) Please accept my sincere apology for missing the interview scheduled for…
6) Please accept my apology for the delay and thank you for your understanding.
三、投诉信
1. 书信结构
投诉信是雅思考试中最常见的一种,写信时应该重点包括三个部分。第一部分为自我介绍、投诉事由、自己的感受等;第二部分为投诉的事实与理由,具体描述当时的情形,如人物、时间、地点和原因等。指出具体问题及其所产生的后果;第三部分可分为提出个人要求或者建议,清晰说明读信人可以做的补救措施,希望有关部门和人士做出相应的改进,以及提出愿望,希望早日得到答复。
2. 常用句型
1) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with .
2) There are some problems with that I wish to bring to your attention.
3) I regret to inform you that .
4) You can imagine my disappointment when I discovered that _.
5) You can imagine my feelings when I realized that this would mean .
6) Even though I telephoned you about ,
7) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.
8) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
9) We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.
四、邀请信
1. 书信结构
写邀请信时,书信主体应该至少写到三个部分。第一部分自我介绍,大概描述活动或计划的内容并指定被邀请参加的人。第二部分指定日期、地址和时间。提出邀请,希望对方参加。如果恰当的话,清楚指明出席活动所需要做的准备,如着装要求等。第三部分设定要求对方回复的日期,并表达感谢。
2. 常用句型
1) I would like to invite you to dinner and be our guest.
2) I would like to invite you to join us and attend this meeting.
3) I am glad to invite you to participate in my graduation ceremony.
4) I am honoured to invite you to our wedding, as I understand that you only come to visit on special occasions.
5) Your presence is immediately requested.
五、建议信
1. 书信结构
写建议信,主要有三个部分。第一部分自我介绍,指出存在的问题,简要指出其可能的不良后果。第二部分具体介绍情况:表示对存在问题有兴趣,分析其产生原因,并提出合理建议。将最重要的建议放在首尾。强调所有重要的事项。第三部分期望对方对该问题重视,早日解决问题并表达自己愿意提供进一步的帮助。
2. 常用句型
1) If I can be of any assistance in any way,please do not hesitate to call me.
2) I am available at Flat 304,Green Revenue,St.Eden,if you require any further information.
3) I am happy to supply any further information you may require and I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
4) Please contact me if I can be of any assistance.
六、咨询求助信
1. 书信结构
咨询信一般分为三部分:第一部分自我介绍,说明写信目的(询问某方面情况),指明你所需要的信息;第二部分提供相关背景信息,指出你为什么需要这些信息。询问具体相关事宜。指明你什么时候需要这些信息;第三部分表达请求帮助的愿望,预先感谢对方的帮助,并表示希望早日得到答复。
2. 常用句型
1) I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.
2) Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
3) I am looking forward to a favorable reply/response at your earliest convenience.
4) Would you provide me with some valuable advice?
5) Your kind reply will be highly appreciated.
6) It would be greatly appreciated if you could furnish me with relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.
7) I am writing to enquire whether I may become a member of your club.
8) I would be grateful if you could let me know your annual fee charges and any other information which would be useful.
9) Please let me know as soon as possible how you propose to settle this matter.
10) Although at this time of year you will have more work to deal with than usual, I would appreciate a reply in a not too distant future.
雅思G类T1写作主要考察考生英文实用写作的运用能力。各位考生在备考时应该注意夯实词汇语法功底,搞清楚不同书信类型的写作结构并熟练掌握常用句型。
雅思g类写作技巧四
一、审题
把握好G类书信语气的第一步,就是要弄清写信的要求和背景。雅思书信写作题目就是由背景信息和写作任务两个部分构成的,我们可以将其分成私人信件和事务性信件两种类型。写给亲朋好友的信可以归为前者,如友情信,请看下面这个例子:
09.01.15
You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend. You should:
1. Tell him/her which kind of food your children like and dislike
2. Tell him/her which kinds of activities your children can attend
3. Tell him/her the time you will pick up your children.
根据背景分析,这封书信是写给朋友请求帮助在自己出差期间照管孩子的,显而易见,这是一封私人信件,由于对方是挚友,写信的语气可以比较轻松和随意,在说明详细内容时,措辞不必讲究但要礼貌。
再来看一个例子:
09.02.07
Your friends have been out on holiday and ask you to stay at their house. However, there is a problem with a piece of equipment in the kitchen. Write a letter to them. In your letter, you should:
1. Describe your feeling at their home
2. Describe what the problem is
3. Describe what action you have done to solve the problem
这是一封抱怨信,写信人在朋友度假期间帮朋友看管房屋,在信中向朋友说明厨房用具的问题,这并非商务场合和正式交涉,切不可义正词严。
09.09.05
You are living in an English-speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise everyday. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. In your letter, you should
1. say how you are disturbed by noise
2. give some suggestions to fix the problem
3. tell the owner further action will be taken if this problem remains unsolved.
这封信同属抱怨信,我们来比较一下它与上一封信的区别,这封信是写给餐馆经理的,说明对于餐馆噪声的不满,收信人与写信人并不熟悉甚至从未谋面,过于熟络的语气和措辞,或者在朋友之间使用的抱怨性较强的词汇都应尽量避免。
将常见的书信分为以下几类:询问信、建议信和求职信一般较为正式;友情信属于非正式信件;投诉信、道歉信、邀请信、感谢信的语气要根据具体情况而定。考生需要注意题目所描述的背景和对收信人的设定,分清写信对象,准确而恰当地把握题目要求,走好G类书信第一步。
二、信头称呼
所谓称呼是指写信人对收信人的称呼用语,一般用“dear”开头,在称呼后可以用逗号(英式)或是冒号“美式”。
1. 如果是写给亲戚或是关系密切的朋友,我们习惯于在“Dear”后加上对其的称呼或是名字(given name)。如:Dear mother或者是Dear Emma;
2. 如果是写给一家公司或者不知道具体职衔的人,可以用Dear Sir or Madam或To Whom It May Concern;
3. 如果知道具体职衔但不知其姓氏,可以以其职位称呼,如Dear Chief Accountant;
4. 如果写信人知道收信人的姓名和性别,但关系不够密切,只属于一般往来,Dear Mrhttps://m.engpx.com/yszx/Mrshttps://m.engpx.com/yszx/Ms/Miss Wang会显得友好却不随便;
5. 另外,也可以用学位及职称加上姓氏或者全名,如Dear Dr. Will Smith, Dear Prof. (Professor) Jane Austin。
三、语气
正文作为整个信件内容最重要的部分,所选用的词汇和句式无不体现着写信人的态度和语气,应该根据不同的信件内容进行挑选和斟酌。
1、投诉信
投诉信的收信对象可以是比较熟悉的人,如抱怨邻居宠物过于吵闹,也可以是针对公司甚至不熟悉的机构或者某个事件而写的,如对社区体育设施的拆除表达不满。
You heard that a sports center would be closed. Write a letter to the manager. In this letter, you should:
1. Tell how you heard about the news.
2. Say what your opinion is about it.
3. Explain how it impacts your life.
由于对象是某运动中心经理,措辞方面就应该较为礼貌,以下的词句是可以选取作为陈述问题的句型:
I am writing to you to complain about...
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
There are some problems with … that I wish to bring to attention.
值得注意的是,也完全没有必要像公文那么正式,只要言语恰当就可以。在叙述问题时可以多以客观性描述为主,辅以主观的感受,显得更有说服力,如:
I found …
I feel quite disappointed that…
在结尾部分说明期望时,也可以搭配同样的语气:
I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.
I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing, better service to the public.
We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
如果是针对邻居再三出现的已经提醒过很多次的问题,我们可以措辞更为非正式一些,如I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 但也不意味着可以出现“guy”等过于口语风格化的语句。
2、工作申请信
G类考生许多都是有工作经验的人,或者曾经有过写工作申请的经历,由于收信人多是公司或者经理级的人,言辞之间应该以正式语气为主:
I wish to apply for the position of…which you advertised in…
I am very interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining a position as … with your company.
结尾部分在阐述希望约见进行面试时,也选取一些较为缓和语气的动词如“hope”来表达:
I am available for an interview every afternoon. Please contact me at…
I hope that after reviewing my enclosed resume you will kindly give me an interview so that I can elaborate on my studies and working experience.
I hope you would consider my application favorably and grant me an interview.
小站后记:看了上文的内容,大家对书信类的写作应该有个基本的概念了吧。正式类的舒心要给人恭谦的感觉,而不那么正式的信件如友情信之类应以友好自然的措辞拉近彼此的距离。
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